Hi Guys,
It is me again! I decided to send the report as is and ask for comments. This is a rough draft. Bernice, I still need your part. Please edit and send back with comments by Thursday, April 24, 2008. Thanks
A few suggestions I noted:
Voknopkia: Please combine Adelphia's overview and history into the background.
Tammy: You and Voknopkia have some of the same information listed. Someone must delete.
Abu: In your conclusion, I think something did not come over, please check that section.
Bernice: Please insert your part and send back to me.
I am not including the reference page on this blog, but it will be in the final report.
Thanks
MMM
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